Game Studies, Media Studies, and Pop Culture from an Educational Game Designer, Writing Coach, ESL & English Teacher, Cultural Consultant, and Food Writer
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One thought on “Violin: A Love Poem to the City of Oranges”
Only critique (since you asked), “parts of town” not very poetic, pulls you out of the piece. Even the word “settlements” would be better. Otherwise, nice piece!
Only critique (since you asked), “parts of town” not very poetic, pulls you out of the piece. Even the word “settlements” would be better. Otherwise, nice piece!